Make your sentences different lengths, mix it up a little.
Long Sentence: Even before the bus dropped me and my classmates off at Hemlock Overlook I had decided that I wouldn't do the zip line, and here I am on the platform strapped into the one thing that I feared most.
One Word Sentence: Wow.
Short: I shrugged, "Same."
Moderately Long: I thought I would die and the adrenaline rushed through my body making me feel like I was on a roller coaster.
Just plain in the middle: But it's too late now, there's no return.
Tuesday, April 15, 2008
A Variety of Sentence Length
Posted by Brianne N. at 7:29 PM
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